Friday, December 12, 2008
Beyond The Line (Mr. Romero)
If Huckleberry Finn lived right here, right now, at this very moment, I believe Huck Finn can change with some guidance. With the Guidance Huck Finn will know right from wrong, good from bad, and saint from sinner. So give Huck Finn a chance, I mean give him a chance he is human as we are today.
First guidance is key for Huck Finn for adjusting to our modern day living, due to the fact that if you lived in the 1700s and was frozen for 308 years. After you have to adjust to the world if not then you will die? So I believe If Huck Finn was given a chance and guided by the right person then he can definitely adjust.
In Conclusion Huck Finn can live right here, right now, at this very moment because he is an intelligent kid, and with the help from a trusty adult Huck Finn will be successful
Tuesday, October 21, 2008
3rd annotation
April 24, 2000
http://www.americaslibrary.gov/cgi-bin/page.cgi/jp/bball/jackie_1
This article states that Jackie Robinson, became an important role model in history. In 1945, Jackie Robinson broke Major League baseball's color barrier. Jackie Robinson signed with the Brooklyn Dodgers, now known as the Los Angeles Dodgers. During this period in time, Jackie brought controversy to the game because if the color of his skin. But Brooklyn Dodgers GM Branch Rickey knew Jackie was a strong individual, able to defend himself; ignore all bias and racist insults from a hostile crowd.
This article states many primary sources, because it states Robinson's career in the Majors and make you feel like you were Jackie Robinson. It also states how Jackie Robinson broke the color barrier, and who spurred his popularity in Baseball. Now I must know what made him want to play baseball, even after facing bias comments.
Thursday, October 16, 2008
4 Questions
A: Then Roger would of just went to the store. Then Roger would purchase the groceries without coming in contact with any setbacks. Without any of the setbacks and detours Roger encountered, then he would of never knew how to defend himself, and win the rights to the streets of Memphis.
Q: Was Richard's mother a little to harsh to her son?
A: I think Richard's mother was a little to harsh. If you were eight years old, and being sent to the store by your mother, and you encounter a gang that beat you up and stole your money. Why would you even try to make an attempt again? I think the mother should of said "Richard I know you are in a confused and scared state of mind because of my behavior, but tonight son you are going to become the man of the house, by fighting off the numbers game and coming home as a winner and not a loser."
Q: How was "The night I won the rights to the streets of Memphis" similar to the story "The use of Force"?
A: They were similar because there are two children probably under the age of 10 still in the learning process of how life works. Children at these young age should just act like kids and that is how the world should work. Children are suppose to have a fun leisure life, and not endure any suffering or pain at a young age.
Q: What did other possible outcomes could have occur, if Roger had a friend walking with him, to the store?
A: The most likely possible outcome that could of happen is that the first time they walk by they have a staredown. Then the 2nd time, they exchange words walking back home. Then the 3rd time they would brawl in the streets no matter how many people were in the gang.
10 Questions
A: Richard's mother.
Q: What did Richard's mother tell Richard to buy?
A: She told Richard to buy a these items at the store.
Q: Who was going to the store to buy groceries?
A: Richard was sent to the store.
Q: What weapon did Richard's mother hand him, when he was jumped the second time?
A: A long wooden stick.
Q: When Richard won the rights to the streets, where did all the events occur?
A: This all happened in Memphis.
Q: When did Richard win the right to the streets of Memphis?
A: During the late night hours.
Q: Did Richard use put to use the wooden stick he was given by his Mother?
A: Yes he did. He used it to as a weapon so that he can protect his respect, reputation, and dignity.
Q: How many attempts did it take for Richard to reach the store?
A: Roger had intercepted detours when going to the store, the 1st and 2nd time. Then the third time was a charm because he finally reached the store.
Q: Who assaulted Roger time and time again when walked by?
A: The gang members that lived in Memphis.
Q: After Roger attacked the gang, who came out and confronted Roger, for his sinister actions?
A: The gang member's parents.
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
2nd Annotation NHD
Despite the racial abuse, particularly at away games, Robinson had an outstanding start with the Royals, leading the International League with a .349 batting average and .985 fielding percentage. His excellent year led to a promotion to the Dodgers, with his debut game on April 15, 1947, marking the first time an African-American athlete played in the major leagues.The harassment did not end, however, most notably by the Philadelphia Phyllis and their manager Ben Chapman. Many players on opposing teams threatened not to play against the Dodgers. Even his own teammates threatened to sit out. But Dodgers manager Leo Durocher informed them that he would sooner trade them than Robinson, setting the tone for the rest of Robinson's career with the team.
Primary source because it has the same information as my other source but this has a little more.
The intended audience is everyone because we are created equal and it doesn't matter what color your skin is.
The background of the author is african american.
Tuesday, September 23, 2008
Thank you M'am
It was a dark cold wintry night in Harlem, New York. The temperature was a little under thirty degrees with a possibility of snow showers. Then there were two people that became really close friends. Sometimes even as close as mother & son. Their names are Roger and Luella Bates Washington Jones. These characters have emotions just like us. They also endure conflicts we also come in contact with.
First & foremost, my favorite characters is Luella Bated Washington Jones. Mrs. Jones just like every other person getting caught up in their work schedule doing probably some overtime or finishing up late work. What Mrs. Jones doesn't know is there is a boy named Roger running from behind to snatch her purse. Swoosh! There goes Roger with Mrs. Jones's purse. Then right after Roger stole the purse he lost his balance. He lost his balance because of all the miscellaneous items held in the purse he attempted to steal. Mrs. Jones eventually caught up to Roger and put him in a half-nelson. Mrs. Jones asked the boy “what is your name?” The boy responded “Roger.” Ms. Jones then asks Roger “ If I let you free will you run?” Roger responded “Yes M'am.” Mrs. Jones then dragged Roger down the street where people are watching. After Mrs. Jones led Roger into her home, she interrogated Roger with a series of questions. After hearing a few of Roger's responses, Mrs. Jones knew or had a impression that Roger is experiencing problems that can't be solved. Mrs. Jones then explained to Roger that she was also Roger's age. Mrs. Jones knew some problems that Roger is facing. She later proclaimed to Roger that “I couldn't always get whatever I wanted.” Roger thought Mrs. Jones was going to say “I did whatever I must do to receive what I deserved.” Then right here Roger learns a lesson that he will never ever forget. Roger sat the dinner table with Mrs. Jones to eat a well-cooked meal with Mrs. Jones. There were points in time where Roger didn't trust Mrs. Jones. After Roger finished eating it was almost midnight. Mrs. Jones was very exhausted from work. Mrs. Jones walked Roger down the steps so he can go back home. Right before Roger left Mrs. Jones gave Roger ten dollars. Roger wanted to say more then “thank you” to Mrs. Jones. But before he could of even said anything the door shut on him.
Secondly, Roger is an average kid that no one understands. Roger's mother & father are never home to spend quality time with Roger. So Roger roams the streets of Harlem, New York trying to fit in society. Then one day Roger believes blue suede shoes will help him fit into society. So late one night Roger attempted to steal Mrs. Jones's purse. But it was so heavy it caused him to lose his footing. Then Roger met Mrs. Jones. This then made Roger feel guilty about his evil deeds. Then Roger was inside Mrs. Jones household. Mrs. Jones asked Roger why he lives the thug life. Roger explains to Mrs. Jones that “he lives a hard life where his parents are never home to make him dinner, buy fancy items, or to take care of himself. In Mrs. Jones home Roger received three sacraments in less then an hour. Mrs. Jones made Roger was his face which is Baptism. Then he received forgiveness from Mrs. Jones which is Reconciliation. Last but not least he received the Eucharist (bread) at the dinner table. Then after dinner Roger was lead outside by Mrs. Jones so he can go home. Right before Roger left he was given ten dollars by Mrs. Jones. Roger wanted to say more then “thank you” to Mrs. Jones. But before he could of even said anything the door shut on him.
In comparison, Mrs. Jones and Roger become mother & son because of the love and care they show for one another. Such as Mrs. Jones giving him dinner and cleaning his face. Roger feels that Mrs. Jones can be his long lost mother because of all the caring things Mrs. Jones did for Roger.
In conclusion Roger was fighting himself and society. Roger is all by himself in Harlem and people aren't accepting him for who he really is. So what should be learned is that to reach your goal only you can complete your goal with hard work and giving up your own time. Then with all these materials in your possessions then anything you work on can be completed. So don't try to take the easy way out. If you do then you will just be fighting even more problems then before.
NHD 2009 (annotations)
2.) In 1919 Jackie Roosevelt Washington was born in Cairo, Georgia. Jackie along with his brothers and sisters was raised single-handedly by his mother. With Jackie growing up in a large single-parent family, Jackie excelled early at all sports and learned to make his own way in life. In 1947, Jackie Robinson, broke Major League Baseball's color barrier. Major League Baseball has not had an African-American player since 1889, when baseball became segregated. The first time Jackie put on a Brooklyn Dodger uniform, he pioneered the integration of professional athletics in America. With Jackie Robinson breaking the color barrier in America's Pasttime he courageously challenged the deeply rooted custom of racial segregation in both the North and the South.
3a.) This article was helpful for me because now I have a better understanding of Jackie Robinson..
3b.) This to me is a primary force because of the information they give which is basic outline.
3c.) The intended audience is African Americans, to show that we all equal and no is different in anyway.
3d.) The background of the author is african american.
Friday, September 19, 2008
NHD 2009
Thursday, September 18, 2008
Why I will graduate in 2012?
Mr. Romero please grade me on intro/conclusion & voice.
It was a nice evening to be roaming Philadelphia streets on August 12, 2008. The temperature was a comfortable sixty degrees. While people were enjoying the comfortable and not muggy weather. I was sleeping. I started dreaming probably near 5:00 A.M. There I am working at Domino's pizza. At 5:25 all I hear from a distance “Nick you got five minutes.” Next thing I know I hear “Nick it is 5:30 time to go.” When I woke up at 5:30 A.M, I learned it was only a dream.
Ahh! I can see my future now. I am on the top again. I have finally graduated from high school. My family, cousins, friends, and others I know applauding me from graduating Constitution High School. There is only one problem with that statement. I am not graduating until 2012. That is another three years from now.
First of all it can and will happen in three more years. With good education, and smart decisions that effects the outcome. The reason why I am receiving good education is because of my parents. My parents probably went through hell, to find a great high school for me to attend. The high school I wanted to attend was Constitution High School. Today the high school I am attending Constitution High School.
Additionally with education you must possess knowledge of the subject. Without knowledge how can you legitimately complete that class? How will you be able to complete assignments, test, projects, or even participate in class? Knowledge of your school and city is important, because how do you know how to get to school or even class? Will you be able to get home by using local transportation if you use it?
Furthermore anything can get finished. Anything can get finished with hard work and important information. Sometimes we can't complete everything alone. Sometimes it is like you need someone to back you up and support you. That is when you will need help. There is a point of time someone will need help. Anywhere you look around the city there is help when we don't even notice. But do we help people when we asked? I mean come on sometimes we can't help because of the time or we are exhausted from doing something a little to much. Sometimes we don't even do it because we just don't feel like it. Students are learning at school by their teachers. Teachers are helping the students prepare for college. Sometimes teachers need our help and most of us believe teachers do not need help but they really do. We need help from our parents. Then there are times our parents need help.
In conclusion anything can be completed with hard work, proper uses of time, and most importantly guidance. This is the reason why I will graduate from Constitution High School in 2012.
