Why I will graduate in 2012?

Mr. Romero please grade me on intro/conclusion & voice.

It was a nice evening to be roaming Philadelphia streets on August 12, 2008. The temperature was a comfortable sixty degrees. While people were enjoying the comfortable and not muggy weather. I was sleeping. I started dreaming probably near 5:00 A.M. There I am working at Domino's pizza. At 5:25 all I hear from a distance “Nick you got five minutes.” Next thing I know I hear “Nick it is 5:30 time to go.” When I woke up at 5:30 A.M, I learned it was only a dream.

Ahh! I can see my future now. I am on the top again. I have finally graduated from high school. My family, cousins, friends, and others I know applauding me from graduating Constitution High School. There is only one problem with that statement. I am not graduating until 2012. That is another three years from now.

First of all it can and will happen in three more years. With good education, and smart decisions that effects the outcome. The reason why I am receiving good education is because of my parents. My parents probably went through hell, to find a great high school for me to attend. The high school I wanted to attend was Constitution High School. Today the high school I am attending Constitution High School.

Additionally with education you must possess knowledge of the subject. Without knowledge how can you legitimately complete that class? How will you be able to complete assignments, test, projects, or even participate in class? Knowledge of your school and city is important, because how do you know how to get to school or even class? Will you be able to get home by using local transportation if you use it?

Furthermore anything can get finished. Anything can get finished with hard work and important information. Sometimes we can't complete everything alone. Sometimes it is like you need someone to back you up and support you. That is when you will need help. There is a point of time someone will need help. Anywhere you look around the city there is help when we don't even notice. But do we help people when we asked? I mean come on sometimes we can't help because of the time or we are exhausted from doing something a little to much. Sometimes we don't even do it because we just don't feel like it. Students are learning at school by their teachers. Teachers are helping the students prepare for college. Sometimes teachers need our help and most of us believe teachers do not need help but they really do. We need help from our parents. Then there are times our parents need help.

In conclusion anything can be completed with hard work, proper uses of time, and most importantly guidance. This is the reason why I will graduate from Constitution High School in 2012.